some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the
child of having a large number of toys?
There are some parents who buy toys in big quantity for their children to play with, this disquisition will discuss
merits and demerits for the child of having a large number of toys.
To embark on, start with demerits for the child of having a huge quantity of toys.Firstly, having an great number of
toys which is same as having too much options.Child will always look for options in every field, which ultimately
impact on them to take decision in the future.For instance, if the juveniles have several number of toys,they get
confused to choose one toy among all other toys to play with. Secondly, children spend their most of the time with toys
instead of other children, which will make introvert person. Result of that, they will face lack in ability to make new
friends.
However, the knowledge of identity and sense of creativity will increase in them for long perspective.To play with many
toys at the same time can increase knowledge of identity.To illustrate this point, child can identify each toy with
its name and colour, which will enhance them to memorise many things at the same time in the future.With regards to
creativity, if child go through many toys, they will know each toy work.As a result, curiosity takes place in them to
know how does things work in the future.
Having analysed the aforementioned factors, it can be recapitulated that, even though child becomes introvert person,
their identity,ability and creativity will be major part of their success in the future.It is hoped that parents have
to aware of plastic which being used to make toys.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...r of toys which is same as having too much options.Child will always look for opti...
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...hich is same as having too much options.Child will always look for options in every f...
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... on them to take decision in the future.For instance, if the juveniles have several...
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...l increase in them for long perspective.To play with many toys at the same time ...
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...time can increase knowledge of identity.To illustrate this point, child can identi...
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...y things at the same time in the future.With regards to creativity, if child go th...
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...many toys, they will know each toy work.As a result, curiosity takes place in them...
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...jor part of their success in the future.It is hoped that parents have to aware o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99256505576 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63281548187 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.207062937 49.4020404114 322% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.833333333 106.682146367 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8333333333 20.7667163134 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382402427798 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209418296332 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174138928196 0.0667982634062 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130795065322 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111155879886 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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