Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive gift.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• thank your friend
• explain how useful the gift is
• arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon
Dear John,
How things going on and How are you doing ? I miss you a lot in these pandemic situation. I am writing this letter to tell me many thanks on the Mobile iPhone XR gift presented by you on my birthday party.
As you aware Last month I lost my mobile in the train while travelling from sdsd city to adass city. As I was in need of a phone that situation you presented me such a latest mobile phone , this phone have all latest features with 256GB really useful for my studies. I already downloaded Zoom , scanner and English related apps as well.
Let’s have some catch up time in December Christmas holidays. I have plan to come to your place and we can celebrate festival together with your family. Miss you a lot , eagerly waiting for your replay. Inform my regards to your parents and your brother.
With love,
Lina
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| 2020-11-22 | lindaja653 | 73 | view |
| 2020-11-22 | lindaja653 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, How things going on and How are you doin...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...esented by you on my birthday party. As you aware Last month I lost my mobile i...
^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ne that situation you presented me such a latest mobile phone , this phone have a...
^
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... presented me such a latest mobile phone , this phone have all latest features wit...
^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...or my studies. I already downloaded Zoom , scanner and English related apps as wel...
^^
Line 7, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d English related apps as well. Let’s have some catch up time in December Chri...
^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
... in December Christmas holidays. I have plan to come to your place and we can celebr...
^^^^
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... come to your place and we can celebrate festival together with your family. Miss...
^^
Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ogether with your family. Miss you a lot , eagerly waiting for your replay. Inform...
^^
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts and your brother. With love, Lina
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52287581699 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26966190587 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679738562092 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9167367169 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9090909091 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25835835424 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925970251756 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959554921342 0.0603063233224 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162083447781 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120546690756 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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