While the life-standard of people is increasing, the crime rate appears to be rising globally, especially in young generation. The causes of this appear to be focuesd in three areas, and a number of to be possible.
Perhaps the major factor here is the highly-competitive job market. For instance, most well-paid jobs requires qualification and experience but young people seem to be not suitable for this kink of jobs. Another reason is the increasingin cost of living, meaning that the cost of day-to-day life can be almost overwhelming for the young. A third factor is the characteristic of some youngsters wanting to life wealthy but lazy at work so they might commita crime.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be to restore some element of state funding to jobless people. Although the public budget are under pressure these day, if we took this tep it would greatly reduce the number of crime. A second remedy might be for the young people to be become more hard-working. Finally, companies should offer more job in working labour.
In summary, factor of jobless and living expense appear to be the main causes. A coordinated response by th state, the institutions and the individuals may well-lesson the severty of the situation.
- Some people feel that boarding schools are an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion 78
- Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world especially among young people Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose solutions you think would be effective 56
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basic and a large number of children play computer games What are the positive and negative effects of playing computer games 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...gh the public budget are under pressure these day, if we took this tep it would greatly r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, second, so, third, well, while, for instance, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96147126189 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626794258373 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4841409568 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314932028295 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108702051413 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940999497465 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194518999609 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111122055294 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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