Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
The statement sanctions the endeavors to save endangered species which only are endangered because of humans. Tacitly, the statement recommends that we should leave those species to die which humans were not involved with their extinction. The efforts of humans in preserving the nature involving money and time, is not without the critics.
The detractors of environmental activists sometimes raise scientific issues. According to the Darwin’s theory of evolution, and the survival of the fittest, some species are “deserve” dying. This process of extinction gives way to the more fit popula...
- Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized. 58
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. 80
- Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas wher 40
- People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences. 70
- The following appeared on the Mozart School of Music Web site."The Mozart School of Music should be the first choice for parents considering enrolling their child in music lessons.First of all, the Mozart School welcomes youngsters at all ability and age 60
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