Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
The statement sanctions the endeavors to save endangered species which only are endangered because of humans. Tacitly, the statement recommends that we should leave those species to die which humans were not involved with their extinction. The efforts of humans in preserving the nature involving money and time, is not without the critics.
The detractors of environmental activists sometimes raise scientific issues. According to the Darwin’s theory of evolution, and the survival of the fittest, some species are “deserve” dying. This process of extinction gives way to the more fit popula...
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition. 80
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 60
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. (4) 50
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time. 80
- Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively 70
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