Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
It is argued that supermarkets achieve more domination in many countries than common and local shops. As a result of this, most shops can not be rival with big shopping centers. According to the opinions of some people, the disappearance of small businesses affect badly to the local communities. Personally, I completely agree with this statement is and I think small shops are also necessary for human beings.
Firstly, the goods of large stories are expensive for the people that are living especially in rural areas. That is why, men cannot buy more things from large stories than they purchase from tiny one. Therefore, if common shops are closed there will be poverty and lack of money. So that, local businesses should stay in their own territory.
Secondly, most supermarkets are situated in urban areas and they far away from rural areas. Moreover, it takes long time to go to cities and to purchase. In other words, if families want to buy, they will have to drive to towns. Consequently, households are not able to get fresh products on a daily basis. Therefore, tiny markets have to be saved for humans.
To sum up, small stories should be saved completely. In order to the fact that human beings can afford the price of products. As well as people should be close to markets to get fresh products and to spend less time to purchase. Thus, small and local businesses have to remain their own place together with big and crowded supermarkets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81274900398 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56776540051 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.7985892521 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.0588235294 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7647058824 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194447529623 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584721997708 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796169791134 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114027650058 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713214358142 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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