Due to the development and rapid expansions of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Due to the development and rapid expansions of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, I disagree with the idea that closed the local business is synonymous with the dying of local communities.
First of all, the development of supermarkets offers a huge potential for local businesses especially small businesses. As a result, supermarkets can help businesses distribute their products nationwide or even larger, worldwide. For this, businesses can distribute their goods to consumers with reduced shipping costs, which is considered a conundrum for businesses, especially small businesses. Consequently, the expansion of supermarkets is not a knife to kill local businesses, it is also a growth potential for these small businesses. Personally speaking, the small business in local should seize this opportunity as a growth potential rather than a competition, which only brings disadvantages to both businesses and consumers.
Secondly, the development of supermarkets also means increased production for local businesses. It is clear that if a supermarket expands its market, the number of goods consumed will become larger and larger. This means that the supply, local businesses, will have to supply an increasingly large amount of goods. It is not only the development of local businesses but also the promotion of the brand of the business to more customers. As a matter of fact, when the business is known by more people, there will be more potential cooperation customers. This will help your business grow faster.
Finally, With supermarkets’ product and food safety policy, businesses are required to perfect their products. For some small businesses, product quality assurance is almost without any safety standards, especially for traditional businesses. So, the distribution in supermarkets is also an opportunity for these businesses to enhance their products in the current modernization era.
In conclusion, opportunities, the potential, a place to consume goods in large quantities and integrate into the world are the things that the strong development of supermarkets brings to small-scale businesses, especially local industry. Although it comes with many other shortcomings, the benefits it brings are likely to be more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.581769437 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22378896656 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490616621984 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7086341149 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.578947368 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462055371757 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166648289274 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167793860854 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269545871828 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218244452155 0.056905535591 384% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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