Employees in the US work five days per week in forty hours. A governmental proposal suggests four days work in exchange for four-fifths salaries arouses benefits for companies and wholly for the country economy for a couple of reasons. However, the professor highly criticized the idea.
firstly, the state postulates the new law increases company profits by shortening human errors and having a more concentrated workforce and avoiding overworked employees. The lecturer denies this idea by stating less work force grows hiring more workforce which inherently requires more spaces, accommodation, and computers. Moreover, the costs of insurance coverages incured by employer consider equally to four days and five days workforces. Also hiring process of workers are costly and companies waste resources to examine newer workers.
secondly, the governmental experts assumed less working hours would lead to devoting more time for family and seeking private interests and enjoying leisure in comparison to five days workers, which in turn increases productivity. The professor also denounces this argument that this in longrun would not be necessarily true. If company decides to release the workforce, it prefers four days workers lose job. In case of promotions, company managers prefer give this opportunity to person with higher level of responsibility and continuous coverage for supervisanry abilities, which is more likely to be available in five days employers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Firstly
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... to four days and five days workforces. Also hiring process of workers are costly an...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...resources to examine newer workers. secondly, the governmental experts assumed less ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s prefer give this opportunity to person with higher level of responsibility and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 22.412803532 31% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 222.0 270.72406181 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64414414414 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8952472746 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644144144144 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.204747074 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.909090909 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06452816374 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302448550229 0.272083759551 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110759133489 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999165277816 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209447364934 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073644676866 0.0443174109184 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.8541721854 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.0289183223 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.2367328918 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.42419426049 129% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 63.6247240618 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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