It is argued that rules and regulations are the bedrock of a functional society. I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, society is partly defined by its laws and rules, which enable it to run smoothly and guarantee interests for most of its members. Since the Stone Age, the daily functioning of a healthy tribe was closely attached to what rules were implicitly agreed upon by the tribe members. Whether it was the roles of the leader of the ancient group or the conciliation approach when internal conflicts arise, rules, and laws were everything that ancient people based on to keep their group functional and manageable. Without these unwritten boundaries, people in authority would have likely to fail in leading their tribe, and internal turbulences would have not been avoided. This would lead to the dispersal of the group or even worse, the death of hundreds as a result of violence and wars.
On the other hand, the roles that rules and laws play in maintaining the order of society are more conspicuous in the modern world. In some Mid-European parts, where rules and laws are weakly enforced or barely in their existence due to political instability, people are greatly suffering from the threats of being shot by terrorist groups. In these societies, citizens find it hard to live a normal, fulfilling life since fleeing from disturbing areas and trying to ensure their very survival are occupying most of their agenda. As a consequence, they do not have time for other priorities in life. In fact, most children in these areas cannot afford a proper education, the weak are not provided with sufficient healthcare, and the poor are barely surviving. Obviously, the lack of law enforcement and stability take a huge toll on the life of millions of people in these places.
In conclusion, rules and regulations lay the foundation of a functional and stable world in which humans can live and thrive.
- Some people argue that because the Internet makes it so easy for children to access facts schools should not focus on teaching facts Instead they should focus on developing children s skills and potential and their relationships with other people To what 50
- The table below shows the amount of waste production in millions of tonnes in six different countries over a twenty year period 73
- Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student s performance Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 84
- The best way to solve world s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion 89
- Nowadays in many countries more and more people are spending their time away from their families Why is this What are the effects on themselves and on their families 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld in which humans can live and thrive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92331288344 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67782275194 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549079754601 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9223598696 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169723158709 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567788147325 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441286607131 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966590294528 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267037402039 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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