Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
It is argued that rules and regulations are the bedrock of a functional society. I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, society is partly defined by its laws and rules, which make it run smoothly and guarantee interests for most of its members. Since the Stone Age, the daily functioning of a healthy tribe was closely attached to what rules implicitly agreed upon by the tribe members. Whether it was the roles of the leader of the ancient group or the conciliation approach when internal conflicts arise, what is agreed beforehand, which are rules and laws, are everything that ancient people based on to keep their group functional and manageable. Without these unwritten boundaries, people in authority would have likely to fail in leading their tribe as well internal turbulences would have not been avoided, thus leading to the disperse of a group or even worse, the deaths of hundreds as a result of violent conflicts.
On the other hand, the roles that rules and laws play in maintaining the order of society are more conspicuous in the modern world. In some Mid-European parts, where rules and laws are weakly enforced due to political instability, people are greatly suffering from the threats of being shot or running into terrorist groups. In these societies, citizens could not live a normal, fulfilling life since fleeing from disturbing areas and trying to ensure their very survival are their daily concerns, so they do not have time for other priorities in life. In fact, most children in the area cannot afford a proper education, the weak are not provided with sufficient healthcare and the poor are barely surviving. Obviously, the lack of law enforcement and stability take a huge toll on the life of millions of people in these places.
In conclusion, rules and regulations are keeping our world functional so that we can live in a safer, more stable place, which is a foundation for a prosperous society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 727, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... have not been avoided, thus leading to the disperse of a group or even worse, the deaths of...
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Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...have time for other priorities in life. In fact, most children in the area cannot ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92987804878 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68375645432 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4740176331 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175897608848 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602913070607 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324348937217 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982909271561 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334512049124 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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