The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
According to me leader is the one who takes everyone with him. Leader is the one who motivates his colleages and his teammates for better work. Leader is the one who keeps himself active all the time. So I think that leader should posses both sense of cooperation and competition.
Some might think competition leads to negative results like jealousy ete, but if someone provides a healthy competition to his comtemporaries then this would lead to development of the organisation and also healthy competition leads to active participation of people into the work what they are doing. For example suppose there are 2 artists giving audition for a role in a play. So if one them gets the role then the otherone without any jealousy congratulate that particular person and try to improve his own skills without comparing it with someone then this is called as healthy competition.
But its person starts comparing himself with someone who has achieved more than him in the field both are working then it would lead to jealousy,depression,anxiety.For example if there are 2 people doing same business but one of them has more revenue than the other and the person with less revenue starts to compare without the person having more revenue then this would lead to jealousy quarrel and many other negative things. So I would not encourage such type of competition.
Now talking about instiling sense of cooperation into youngsters then is a one of the most vital component of leadership. A firm or an organisation can't function well if there is no cooperation between the different people working in it. For example to run a milk dairy business we need cooperation from the milk producer to the retailer in business terms we call it as Supply Chain Managament. If there 2 people on who have the skills to make people works together and other one is talented in that particular sector but not cooperative then in such cases the first person would be good leader than the second ene because he knows how to manage the people and how to run an organisation properly.
So atlast I just want to say that both healthy competition and cooperation will help us to form a good leader and unhealthy competition would lead to jealousy,anxiety and depression.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, i think, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88511749347 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04560656998 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472584856397 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.612487762 60.3974514979 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.642857143 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196735452784 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691568801829 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474028369769 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105890134071 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429955109531 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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