It is argued that rules and regulations are the bedrock of a functional society. I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, laws and rules are one of the defining characteristics of a society, which enable it to run smoothly and guarantee interests for the masses. Since the Stone Age, the daily functioning of a wealthy and healthy tribe was closely attached to the rules implicitly agreed upon by the tribe members. Whether it was the roles of the leader or the conciliation approaches when internal conflicts arise, rules and laws are effectively the tool that ancient people based on to keep their group functional and manageable. Without these unwritten boundaries, people in authority would have likely to fail in leading their tribes as well as internal disputes would have not been avoided and resolved, thus leading to the dispersal of a group or even worse, the death of hundreds as a result of violent conflicts.
On the other hand, the roles that rules and laws play in maintaining the order of society are more noticeable in the modern world. In some Mid-European parts, where rules and laws are weakly enforced due to political instability, people are greatly suffering from the threats of being shot by terrorists. In these societies, citizens could not live a normal, fulfilling life since they are occupied by the thoughts of fleeing from disturbing areas and trying to ensure their very survival , so they do not have time for other life priorities. In fact, most children in these areas cannot afford a proper education, the weak are not provided with sufficient healthcare and the poor are barely living above the poverty line. As a consequence, the lack of law enforcement and political stability are taking a huge toll on the life of millions of people in these places.
In conclusion, rules and regulations lay the foundation of a safe, stable and functional community in which its members could live and thrive.
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- Society is based on rules and laws If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do it could not function To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement 78
- The best way to solve the world s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel Do you agree or disagree 56
- The line graph below shows the number of cell phone subscribers in a particular city by gender 85
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...suffering from the threats of being shot by terrorists. In these societies, citiz...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and trying to ensure their very survival , so they do not have time for other life...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot have time for other life priorities. In fact, most children in these areas cann...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94512195122 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75442668164 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4567038148 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188840836625 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644530536526 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312089968644 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107652775333 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266616501452 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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