The growing of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.DO you agree or disagree?
According to me in these COVID pandemic situation the online shopping business is reached high level, in my opinion I partially accord with the notion. The upcoming paragraphs will cast light on factors in favour of both online and offline shopping.
On one hand there are several reasons favor to this Phenomena, people can buy anything from anywhere by just click on one button from electronic device. For example, last month I purchased a smart phone from online store with a discount of 15 %, free shipping option and got a coupon of $100, along with these got the EMI option as well. So, I paid very small amount of money and within 2 days I got the phone in my hand. I took 12 months EMI so I no need to pay full amount on the same time when I bought phone, which make me feel happy.
On the other hand, people buying the vegetables never happy, we feel that buying vegetables by seeing and touching will be fresh then choosing online. A very good example here is my uncles and parents. They always prefer in-stores fruits purchase so that they can check the freshness. It’s not only for vegetables can happen for buying clothes online as well some percentage of people not satisfy by trying it for the size and material quality.
All together I can conclude that some things we can buy using online and something we buy from local shops, but buying from online shops doesn’t mean the towns and cities will disappear.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
According to me in these COVID pandemic situation the o...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...hand there are several reasons favor to this Phenomena, people can buy anything from...
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Line 8, column 53, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
... I can conclude that some things we can buy using online and something we buy from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, well, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27992322955 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.193586913 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.636363636 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139206375034 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046056388311 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515556175921 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940894339635 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610545657582 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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