The given table illustrates the proportion of workers employed in 6 different industries in Australia ustralia between 1980 and 2009.
Overall, it can be seen that, in the industries except manufacturing and retail the percentage of workforce increased during the period. Also, the biggest decease in the workforce was withnessed in the manufacturing industry.
To begin, in 1989, the highest percentage of workers were employed in the manufacturing industry(15%), followed by retail(11.8%). The proportion of workers in healthcare and construction were around 9% and 8%, respectively. Whereas, in the education and tourism industry, the figures were comparetively low, at 6.8% and 5.5%, respectively.
In 2009, the proportion people working in the manufacturing and retail industry declined, to just below and just over 10%. In the other 4 industries the figures rose. The highest increase in the percentage of workforce was seen in health care industry, to 11.8% followed by construction(8.3%). In the education and tourism industry, there was only a slight change in the percentage, to 7.5% and 7.3%, respectively.
- The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the 67
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 67
- Some people think that Books are losing as a source of information and entertainment Do you agree or disagree 75
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 56
- Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games How could these problems be reduced 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61764705882 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38196417203 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7523830714 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157181427231 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620390576544 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580455414662 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10806671818 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555545166491 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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