There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Lina , writing this letter to bring your notice regarding the problems bus facility provided by your company. I am very disappointed with the services provided.
I am staying in the line street road, every day I use the bus number 2334AD to reach my office. Even many students also use these series buses to go to schools and colleges.In fact the problem is the bus always coming late day by day so , it’s getting too late to reach our destinations. Morning time the bus is very dirty and the driver and ticket collector never feel responsible. We submitted the feedback form but no luck there are no action items were taken. Some buses need service as well as the AC water is leaking inside the bus.
I would request you to change the driver and TC, in addition if possible please add some more new buses which are in good condition.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convince.
Yours sincerely,
Lina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Lina , writing this letter to bring your notic...
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Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bring your notice regarding the problems bus facility provided by your company. I...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ppointed with the services provided. I am staying in the line street road, eve...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ies buses to go to schools and colleges.In fact the problem is the bus always comi...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the bus always coming late day by day so , it’s getting too late to reach our dest...
^^
Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r earliest convince. Yours sincerely, Lina
^^^
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est convince. Yours sincerely, Lina
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, so, well, in addition, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40741906957 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4629960291 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246933721379 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843651980081 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673845382459 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131117931278 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905533371567 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.