Nowadays people are more ambitious regarding the studies and carrier. Some people think to start the married life after completed studies and settled well but, some people think marriage is not the stopper for carrier growth. However, it is constructive as well as distractive.
On one hand, there are some disadvantages to Early marriages firstly, this will lead to more responsibilities to look over to family, kids, their education, and daily needs. This will be stress and people need to work hard to fulfil the requirements and unable to take any forward step to change in carrier. Secondly, they were unable to continue or start new courses which can help them to get promotions in the workplace due to lack of money and other family commitments such as parents health expenditure, kids’ education and many more. Besides, kids after 30 are leading to some health issues in women and some people are facing problems and consult doctors regarding this matter of conceiving children’s.
On the other hand, have advantages as well, firstly, some people never feel responsibility till get married and having children’s. They were never interested in saving money and buying a house and so on. Secondly, they are not much interested to work hard and ignore the promotions, carrier growth. Furthermore, they are persons without goals and just wasting money on things which are not necessary.
To conclude there are advantages and disadvantages as well, so it will vary from person to person. Every individual needs to think and take decisions respectively to get a more enjoyable personal life and professional life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16287878788 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83401942349 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6409377829 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108305141834 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380924780839 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208531400199 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630179379757 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296578206088 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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