At the outset of new millennium, education has became the maider requirement not only for distance learning but also for getting wide range of knowledge from different area. It is stated that, in this day people says distance- learning programs and study at home very benefical. while, half of number people opinion that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. I completely disagree with second statement and my complete agreement paragraphs before reaching to conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that,education is very important for everyone its might be online or offline class. The main factor behind this is that increase in number of online classes registration. For instance: According to Amercia survey more then 80 per cent students attending online classes than attending colleges because its save their money not only but also time. Hence, it is enough to prove that why ut is more benefical.
In addition to this, the other reason beyond this is that being targetting for excellent result that is main dream of every student to get good result. For example: In India 100 percent result is given by home schooling students because they are only engaged with those subjects which they foud of more as well as only 50 per cent student get 100 per cent marks by attending colleges owing to hey are force to learn all subjects neither they like or not. Therefore, it can be said that internet learning is more important than physical learning.
To sum up,. after the analization of total agreements from my mind, distance learning programs are increase wordly, However this prevalling circumstance is very benefical for evry student to get extreme level of knowledge.
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- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your opinion 84
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 11
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 61
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.074204947 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64388416683 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600706713781 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7904650418 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172958603109 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642969656792 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972468996673 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105907007275 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110063735326 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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