At At the out of new millennium, job is basic maiden requirement of everyone not only for good ways but also for satisfication of own self. It stated that, nowadays people agree that it is best to accept a unexpected condition, such as an unhappy job of less wages. But other hist of people believe that is better to try more opportunities to improve such situation. Both point of view will be articulted in upcoming paragraph before reaching to sum up.
It natewarthy mentain that, accept bad situation and less money makes person strong and motivate them to get satisfied and excepted salary. The main factor behind this circumstance is that money is pivotal need for everyone to survive in this world. Main requirement of everyone to complete their basic wants ( food, shelter, clothes) So it is compulsory for them to get unsatisfied wages. For Instance : In India around 50 per cent people are engaged with law ways job to complete their basic needs. Hence, it is enough to prove that why unsatisfactory job is important for people.
On the contrary side, other think it is better to try and improve such situation. The main factor behind this factor is to get luxury and glad life. For example : In India 80 per cent people change their job to get more wages and luxury life. Nowadays people want their basic needs also but they prefer their status more. Therefore it is clear that why satisfaction job is important for people.
To sum up, after the analization the both agreement from my mind, get unsatisfaction job is only help person to complete their basic needs. To improve the way of live people always try to change their working conditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76306620209 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59063042593 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5287062686 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.4375 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225269669276 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811017377971 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832437496974 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140345546317 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660102970534 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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