Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that the finest way to deal with a bad situation is to admit it such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that they should try to overcome the problems. From my perspective, I agree with the latter, for it will improve the quality of one’s life and make them more persistent.
Some people feel that it is best to accept a bad situation. The reason may be that after several attempts to change the poor conditions, they still fail. Hence, they are tired of doing so and they give up. Another reason is that they are afraid of being unsuccessful in tr...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 30, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ings. I agree that everyone should try and improve the bad situations. For one thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, for one thing, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53693181818 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40822642079 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482954545455 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4852337467 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0476190476 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7619047619 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.19047619048 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205549805615 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767060698402 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084449633877 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130089769811 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631614391414 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.58950901804 76% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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