Global warming is a big problem What are the causes and solutions?
Currently, global warming is certainly a topical issue as so many nations are seeing this pattern. From my perspective, there are two main causes and a great number of solutions that we can take.
First of all, the main cause is probably the increase in carbon footprint. For example, CO2 is generated by the sheer volume of private vehicles commuting daily on the roads due to the demand of the public for transportation. Moreover, it stems from the burning of fossil fuels caused by the industrial activities of factories and power plants. Consequently, tonnes of CO2 are released into the atmosphere every year. The other factor that brings about global warming is deforestation. Forests accumulate large amounts of carbon dioxide, but when they are cut down, it would make CO2 remain in the atmosphere and form the greenhouse effect.
However, there are various measures that can be adopted to lessen the problem. Firstly, it is recommended that policymakers need to reduce our dependence on fossil fuels and promote alternatives including bioplastics, biodiesel, solar and wind power. Besides, they can launch some campaigns to foster the awareness of the public to the current situation through social media and television. Also, authorities should issue strict regulations about illegal logging such as paying a massive fine to discourage the corrupt practice. Finally, individuals can play a part by making lifestyle changes. For instance, they should only use personal transportation when it is really necessary. Instead, they could opt for public transports to help to protect the environment.
In conclusion, the causes of this phenomenon are primarily to do with the rise in CO2 and desertification; the viable solutions involve the actions of governments and everyone can carry out to reduce its impacts. If we are to save our planet, it is essential to treat this as a priority for all concerned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28524590164 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98275253495 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2759303002 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145183243176 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418073546927 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551159655791 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947626726258 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628560197819 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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