Nowadays culture is much the same all around the world when compared to previous times. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development
With the advancement of technology, it is easy to get information of other country’s culture. As a result, people are adopting different tradition and now we can see some culture all around the world. Positive development is that, people aware about all culture and it affects the tourism is the negative development. I will discuss further in below paragraph.
On one hand, due to globalization world become small village while, in past people did not had much information other culture because lack if internet facility. In contrast, now everyone has internet facility thus, anyone can get the information and now people are curious to get the new information. Another reason is migration of people to one country to another. For instance, in USA, people like to celebrate diwali, holi and in India, Christmas is celebrated with full of joy and zeal. In addition, business has been developed such as; Indian traditional cloths are exported to foreign country and western cloths are imported in India. So relationship between countries has been developed.
On other hand, people are more influenced towards western culture thus, some traditions are extinct. For example, in past, people liked to enjoy kite festival with family but now some people have no interest. Furthermore, people are adopting western tradition such as, in India, there one tradition to live with family but now we can see more nuclear family.
To conclude that, same culture has more advantages then disadvantages. Apart from that, to save tradition and culture is the responsibility of every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22440944882 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82756387907 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2041664201 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110208530644 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424845143145 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616784165549 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084085574839 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661617029395 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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