Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Education plays a vital role in the life of everyone and in today's modern era, this has become a major part of the society also. Therefore, some people think that out of all subjects which are taught in school, history is one of the major subject. However, other masses believe that subjects related to science and technology are more essential rather than history. According to my opinion, science and technology like subjects have more utilization as compared to ancient period related subjects and both the views are discussed below paragraphs.
To begin with, some individuals believe that history is one of the principal subjects which is more important and there are plethora of reasons behind this. First of all, the major reason behind this is cultural value. As, if students learn the culture and the history of their country then they bind with their culture more and show more interest towards the tradition of their notion. The main reason is also that as it represents student's identity according to their nation. Moreover, this also depicts the past life of their elders and students get more knowledge about the part of their country and elders and also helps them to compare the past situations and present world.
On the contrary, other masses think that, science and technology related subjects such as biology, chemistry, physics and so on are more essential as compared to history. Because, by learning these knowledge subjects, students will make their career better as this will boost their brains activation which will help them in their career development and skills. For instance, technology be given a wide range of information about electric and android gadgets such as through mobile phone, people talk with their relatives and loved once from anywhere. In addition, biology and chemistry subjects help students to know more about existence of living things and wide range of unique species which exist on earth. And also gives information about medicines and drugs related to this.
To conclude, according my opinion, science and technology related subjects are more beneficial than history because this gives a lot of information about all the things which relates to society and the life of humans.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... has become a major part of the society also. Therefore, some people think that out ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44045591673 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5959464141 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299169059931 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109880526893 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107963710374 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205619615202 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121075093995 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... has become a major part of the society also. Therefore, some people think that out ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13461538462 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44045591673 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5959464141 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.6 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299169059931 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109880526893 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107963710374 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205619615202 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121075093995 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.