One part of society state that history is most essential subject for school education. While, another group of humans reckon that nowadays science and technology are more crucial subjects rather than history. I opine that, in school education all of these subjects are important equally.
To embark upon, history shows us great bravery of our ancestors, which gives motivation to students to do something remarkable in their own life. In addition to that, history teaches us to not repeat mistakes which already had done in past by people. Furthermore, it provides us the solutions to deal with similar type of problems in further life. Moreover, history depicts the changes which took place with the time so it might gives us clues to predict future situations.
However, science and technology are also equally vital portions of school education as history because these subjects prepare a child to cop up with modern society’s pace. For instant, technology subject introduces children with new E-system and advanced tools like computers and all. These gadgets make a person’s life easier. Apart from this, science subject gives knowledge about new discoveries and about maintaining personal health as well. Moreover, science covers topics like sex education and all which are significant to teach in today’s advanced world.
To recapitulate, I would like to say, all of these subjects are very crucial because where history provides us knowledge from past, there technology and science are preparing students for future development.
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- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64084504733 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7541259814 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294272898593 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101460850379 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621737245552 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185567814577 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803099308772 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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