You have a friend who lives in a different country. You will organize a party soon and have thought to use a foreign recipe. Write a letter to the friend asking for a recipe from his/her country for the party you are organizing.
In your letter, tell your friend about the party
ask for the recipe
explain why you need the recipe from his/her country
Hi James,
How are doing? Hope this email finds you good. It’s been a long time since we last were in touch but, I haven’t forgotten all the wonderful times we spent together last year. I am writing this letter to know more details about the noodles recipe which you cooked when we met at your place.
We want to throw a party for all my friends and relatives next week on the occasion of my elder son's birthday. We thought of planning a UN day theme so, we need to prepare at least 5 countries' food to represent this theme. The guest will dress up to represent any of these countries and join the party.
I need your help to share the shrimp noodles recipe last time you cooked, it was so yummy and I think it’s one of the famous food from Japan. Let me know more details about the ingredients required and the method of cooking as well. I hope the attendees will like this food as I feel it was so tasty thus, it can represent one country food in the party theme.
Why don’t you pop up at my place at this party, try to join we will have fun as I invited our college friends. Take care, waiting for your reply. Convey my wishes to aunty and uncle.
Best wishes,
Lima
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi James, How are doing? Hope this email finds you...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 232, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'noodles'' or 'noodle's'?
Suggestion: noodles'; noodle's
...s letter to know more details about the noodles recipe which you cooked when we met at ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, thus, well, at least, i feel, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28634361233 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07244260215 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8426761298 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2142857143 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214753853024 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064326186205 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564695068586 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123582116267 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00377045399988 0.0580467560999 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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