Shopping sector is greatly contributes towards the development of any nation.so the attributes which leads the growth of shopping habits is always controversial. Many believes that age has higher impact as compared to other factor. In this article we will discuss different age groups as well as other aspect which exacerbate the shopping habits
To commence with,different age groups has distant interest and responsibilities. people whose age is in-between 30 to 40 have more duties than the individuals are in teenager age.In support of previous statement,generally adult age people are married and have family. To support their family, they are more in favor of savings money instead of spending more on shopping. However,particular age groups have different shopping interest. To justify,teenagers spend more on new technologies such as video games,computer etc . On the other hand seniors citizen would like to purchase health equipment's
regard to the age, in the paragraph mentioned above, Gender and media also influence the shopping habit. Since from birth, male and female shopping interests are much different from each other. Female are more inclined towards beauty product or clothes,while male more into new invention . In spite of these factor media and advertisement industries also responsible to take the shopping sector at such great height because in commercial , they choose those figure to advertise their product,to whom people admire the most. For instance , a research has been conducted by the British Columbia in 2019 revealed that media afflict the people at more advanced level that any other aspect.
To conclude, i would say , not only ages other factor such as gender, media also play vital role in the growth of shopping habit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67300380228 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2230026304 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 290.57271035 49.4020404114 588% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 373.0 106.682146367 350% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.75 20.7667163134 317% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 7.06120827912 375% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356163331382 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215191338277 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347698974067 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214983558638 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310229640219 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.2 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.42 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.49 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.84 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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