Unfortunately, it is true that our distance from our neighbours keeps on growing. Its reached at that level where we even don't know who is living next to our door which has disturbing effects on our communities. This article will explore the impact of technology on individuals as well as discuss the solution to overcome it.
To commence with, lets first understand the factors which is responsible to increase the gap between neighbours at adverse rate. first and foremost, continuous inventions of technology at spike rate because of these people prefer to invest more times on mobiles and playing video games then taking to their near residents.These gadgets have so many applications which used advanced level of artificial intelligence to involve the people so that they contribute more time on these devices. In addition to this, now a days people love to interact with virtual friend than the human near to them. To substantiate, every year the revenue earned by social sites such as Facebook, Instagram is keep on elevated.
Today there is a need we should pay attention towards alternative ways, so that effects caused by these inventions can be reduced. people should limit the use of gadgets by proper time management. Government should put restriction on excessive use of artificial intelligence which hijacked the human minds.Moreover, doctors also gives the seminars to elaborate the significance of interaction which later helps them for emotional balance
To conclude, excessive growth of modern technology has detrimental effects on people mind,so there is a need government as well as citizen should pay attention towards the minimum use of these technology,so that individuals pay more attention towards to build relationships who stay near to them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35460992908 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00152535706 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.706645636 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.0 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132478073571 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540102180951 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043884358242 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070336260859 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343076298487 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.