college and universities should require all faculty to spend time together working outside in the academic world profession relevant the course they teach
Education is the backbone of a nation and a civilized nation is built up by getting proper guideline from the teachers. According to the prompt of the recommendation, college and universities should require all faculty to spend time together working outside in the academic world profession relevant the course they teach. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this prompt due to some legitimate logical reason that I have described in three ways.
To begin, Faculty members pass their busy schedule in the college or university taking class, counselling students, taking exams and evaluating the exam scripts. However, they do not have enough time to discuss with other faculty members about their outside worlds such as their personal matters, family problems and other relevant issues. If they properly share their opinions and get suitable guideline from their colleagues, they will become more strengthen and become more energetic and vigorous to perform their academic work.
Further, Sometimes the faculty members can easily disclose their academic issues more pervasively with their colleagues outside the university or college. For instances, If any students claim against any faculty members or if any students denigrate any faculty members reputation then it needs a proper solution to interpret the integrity or exonerate from the case. So a faculty member can easily express their opinions outside the university or colleges because inside the university or colleges there is some limitations and some rules and regulations. To avoid any further chaos, faculty members need to get together outside.
Finally
Of course, Some argue that faculty members do not require to spend time working outside their academic life because of the betterment of the university's reputations. However, Until I will not get proper information about faculty members independent opinions, counselling and their safety issues, I will not pursue the recommendations of the prompt.
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...cause inside the university or colleges there is some limitations and some rules and regulations. To avoi...
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... members need to get together outside. Finally Of course, Some argue that facu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, then, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75040131798 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5497514043 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.333333333 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366795844287 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158528311807 0.0831039109588 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226843649367 0.0758088955206 299% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244944893541 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121752628535 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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