You have lost your student identification card This has created some problems for you Write a letter to the director of student services In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

Dear Sir,
I am your student Vipul Mehta, from 2nd year of Engineering class of Computer science. The purpose of writing this letter is to let you know that I have lost my students ID card and seek your support. As I remember, I was studying in the university library till 8.00pm and I left the card at the desk. Upon reaching home I quickly realized that I left the card in the library. Next day morning, I even checked the Lost and found property section but couldn't find my card.

Its little worrisome, as card holds access to almost everything in the university. It allows access to the attending class, Library, Computer class, Cafeteria which I can not access. Also there is an annual cultural fest coming up in next few weeks and I have signed up for the Computer coding challenge. The event will allow students having a valid ID card and I would really like to participate.

I request you to initiate the process of issuing a new card. Meanwhile I will let you know if I find my existing card.
Name - Rohan Sharma
Roll no - 32453
Department - CS2A

Waiting for your response.

Thanks,
Vipul

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir, I am your student Vipul Mehta, from 2nd year of Engineering class of Compute...
^^
Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...the Lost and found property section but couldnt find my card. Its little worrisome, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lass, Cafeteria which I can not access. Also there is an annual cultural fest coming...
^^^^
Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...iate the process of issuing a new card. Meanwhile I will let you know if I find my existi...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, while, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64141414141 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47935961059 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8332567654 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5833333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328143371007 0.216113520407 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104022873955 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113180393315 0.0603063233224 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200154309347 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083627503052 0.0580467560999 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.