The graph and register display the average monthly degree and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Overall, this chart compares the number of days the sun rises in each of the three cities each month.
In the list, we can see the lowest sundials in London, 1180 hours. This is a very short time. Most sundials are in New York city. Sydney has 62 hours less sunshine than New York city.
The lowest levels are observed in London and New York in January. It will be around 5 and 10 degrees in February. In Sydney the highest level will be in January. Sydney is 20 degrees different from New York city in January. The highest temperature in New York city is 30 degrees in July. But then it starts to go down again. In London, the highest temperature is 24 degrees in July and August. The lowest level in Sydney at this time will be 16 degrees.
The graph and register display the average monthly degree and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.
Overall, this chart compares the number of days the sun rises in each of the three cities each month.
In the list, we can see the lowest sundials in London, 1180 hours. This is a very short time. Most sundials are in New York city. Sydney has 62 hours less sunshine than New York city.
The lowest levels are observed in London and New York in January. It will be around 5 and 10 degrees in February. In Sydney the highest level will be in January. Sydney is 20 degrees different from New York city in January. The highest temperature in New York city is 30 degrees in July. But then it starts to go down again. In London, the highest temperature is 24 degrees in July and August. The lowest level in Sydney at this time will be 16 degrees.
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- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living enlarged and life expectancy is increasing There are many positives aspects to improving health care As well as increasing the number of ambulances we can save many lives as a resu 56
- There is no need to write a separate conclusion as you must do in Writing Task 2 This is because you are not being asked to conclude an argument or evaluate your discussion of a topic as in Writing Task 2 Remember your opinions are not required in Writing 56
- The graph and register display the average monthly degree and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Overall this chart compares the number of days the sun rises in each of the three cities each month In the list we can see 61
- The diagram and table represents the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunlight per year in three leading cities Overall what stands out from the graph is that coming to December the statistics in the three cities were the sa
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40243902439 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13881023485 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530487804878 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5403043521 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.5714285714 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380369899199 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115288495912 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18908714251 0.0843802449381 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326487942469 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.244162680941 0.0819641961636 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 13.2329268293 39% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.06 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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