The agriculture is the main source of every country. However most of teenagers falter to selection in this job.This essay will examine the main reason why this is happening and then present a possible solution to tackle this problem.
Nowadays, most of young people do not choose these types of jobs. Becouse they interested in creative professions. Farming is demand to be dirty in workers. For example, if people do these kind of professions, they encounter some problems namely dirty. Becouse of they prefer to choose cleanly professions. In addition, many youngsters do not want to dou to lifestyle. Becouse most of occasions, farming is located in country side place and also they do not comecross any difficulties. That is why young people do not want to suffer when they finish their studies and also they find it difficult to find work in the country side place. So they strive to find modern work.
On the other hand, the agriculture is a great help to the development of every country. The government is creating a very wide range of opportunities for fermers in my country. For example the government is providing soft loans for farmers to developing. Nevertheless, most of young people do not want to that kind of professions.
In conclusion, in my opinion youngsters should choose these kind of jobs. Becouse they can make a lot of money from the farming and also promotes very rapid development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93723849372 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79565546898 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518828451883 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0365946404 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4117647059 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0588235294 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132776114089 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040007609209 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476338288042 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837100389201 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561662846832 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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