You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram shows the production of circuit boards Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the production of circuit boards.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

The given diagram provides information about manufacturing process of circuit boards.

Overall, a circuit board is manufactured by raw material which goes through multiple processes like cutting, spraying and cleaning. The process of attaching IC is automated and the prepared circuit board is tested twice before packaging and delivery.

Now turning to the details, the first process is cleaning and spraying the required material using fire retardant. After cleaning the sprayed and cutted material, IC's are attached to the board by an automated process.

As illustrated in the diagram, the board prepared after soldering and attachment process is inspected visually and quality checks are performed as well. The chips rejected during quality check and inspection are thrown away. A final round of testing is also performed to recheck the chips and again the rejected chips are thrown away. After all checks and validation the circuit board is packed and delivered to the factories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...automated and the prepared circuit board is tested twice before packaging and del...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, well, after all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49673202614 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69255662234 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2033416069 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831250224806 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414743915992 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405124529273 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649566401897 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440074310746 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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