In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries, possessing a home rather than renting one is very significant for human.Some people are not considered to be important that owns a home and they prefer to rent one.However, I think that if everybody owns a home, they will have convience, as this process isn't shown that money problem and spend waste time.
Firstly, people who own a home have several convience and opportunities.In my opinion, every one of them inhabits where they own a home, they alwaysfeel suit themselvese and if they want to keep pet,they can do, But this may not be allowed if they are renting.Another convenience is that they can renovate the house as they wish or make changes for example he can decorate and repair his house with the equipment he likes.As for renting one is impossible to do anythings which you have restrictions.
Secondly, from another home to other one when moving not to spend waste time is not problem.Their own home living people use productive their own's time instead looking for home to live and move to other one , as they don't get tired rather than renting one is spent waste their time by people, but this time they suffer difficulty to find renting house and they are tired and sometimes renting one is old, untidy or it is much longer for their work.
Finally, it is important that owning a home rather than renting one as people don't come across the problem of the money.If they have their own home they do not pay rent every month and instead spend the money on the necessities.But living in a rental can be expensive, a situation than can be difficult for a tenant to get their own home in the future.
To conclude, in some counties, having a home rather than renting one is very essential for public, so I prefer that everybody lives their owning home for them is very comfortable and they never have problem which in terms of convenience proper use of time and payment of rent.
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- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 56
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as for, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61646371137 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457227138643 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.8789350199 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 316.4 106.682146367 297% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.8 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.8 7.06120827912 337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36378424991 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256194738826 0.084324248473 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747307007454 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256194738826 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747307007454 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.93 50.2224549098 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.2 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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