Governments throughout the world believe that their most significant purpose is economy while some people argue that other targets have the same importance for a country. I believe that economic progress is an important target but there are numbers of others have the same level of importance.
On the one hand, economic targets play a significant role in our life which has many impacts on every aspects of life are the main reason why many governments think that the most important target of is economy. Most qualities of our life are affected sharply by economic. For example, in developed countries, their GDP index which is always in high level makes the happiness of their resident increase much in recent years. Additionally, there are various values could be also affected by impacts of economy such as education or environment. As an instance, undeveloped countries with a weak economy always have a low-quality education for children.
On the other hand, I would agree with the idea that other progress have equally value with economy for a country. Although the effects of a weak economy, there are many countries have a great quality of life which is the most important purpose of these countries. In fact, Bhutan, an Asian country, has deleted GDP index, changed into happiness index as the most significant target and became the place where the percentage of crime is lowest. Furthermore, it is undeniable that other progress such as pollution index or the safety of resident also have important roles in our life. For instance, countries which have a great economy such as USA or China are the place have billions tons of CO2 emission every year. Therefore, the proportion of people there always have medical problem is always high.
In conclusion, I believe that economy is one of the most important purposes but there are many other target also makes great impacts on our life which government should pay more attention for.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'targets'?
Suggestion: targets
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00925925926 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.614609264 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456790123457 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9137462894 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.928571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294320376608 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106958409275 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790631287513 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201623298349 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474864132846 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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