You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays.
You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my interest for the job opportunity I saw in a newspaper yesterday. The designation was the company accountant.
My name is Chirag Bhardwaj and I belong to Gurgaon which is in the northen state of India that is Haryana. I completed my masters in accountancy from Xavier college in 2013.
I started my professional life through the college placement; thus, I have been working as a credit specialist in KPMG limited, which is a leading financial firm of India. I completed my VBA certification from CPA in 2018, and I also have the knowledge of financial reportings and yearly data consolidation graphs.
Furthermore, I am excited to be a part of your organization since it is a successful monetory support provider in the world. I aspire to work in such a diverse environment where one can connect with international clients as well. Consequently, I would also have the exposure to foreign office culture and a competitive atmosphere on a global platform.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Chirag Bhardwaj
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-02-26 | Mohammed Idris | 70 | view |
| 2021-10-27 | thao hoang | 73 | view |
| 2020-12-17 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 78 | view |
| 2020-06-29 | rajasingh | 86 | view |
- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society 78
- Nowadays many natural places are damaged by people who keep throwing their garbage What are the causes How can this be solved 78
- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child s development However others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- As global trade increases between different countries many daily necessities are produced in other countries Such goods are usually transported a long distance Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks 73
- In recent years the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing What kinds of changes can occur Do you think these changes are positive and negative 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...h is a leading financial firm of India. I completed my VBA certification from CPA...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19271904444 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3303665015 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128227290175 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423351208117 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507342426175 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639561054801 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574694147211 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.