You have seen an advertisement in a newspaper for a job in the city post office during your holidays.
You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the post office. In your letter,
-- introduce yourself
-- explain what experience and special skills you have
-- explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently came across the print media an announcing regarding a requirement for a position in your department, while I was on a vacation. I have a desire to join your prestigious firm.
My name is Elizabeth Manickam, born and brought up in a beautiful place named the Nilgiris in South India. I was privileged enough to get an opportunity to study socio-economics and hold a bachelor in it.
I have a three years of hands-on practice in this field, besides that, I am an active listener as well as someone who is good at problem-solving and customer service. In addition to this I expertise in being good at time management.
I am extremely passionate to grow into a position where my efficiency can make a difference. Moreover, I think that working for this post will allow me to interact with many customers, consequently, this will improve my communication skills.
I would be delightedly grateful to you if you would consider me for this position and give me an opportunity to work at your esteemed institution.
Yours Faithfully,
Elizabeth Manickam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01098901099 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25499254256 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5914790066 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14632301366 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541124030089 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485232339997 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751096403976 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056425181556 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.