Due to the rapid development and expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Because of the fast growth rate and rise of departmental stores in few nations, most tiny native trades find it difficult to fit in. Certain public assume that the shutdown of such habitats will lead to the end of small dealers. I agree with the above statement because of the current world scenario.
Currently, online shopping has become a popular purchase system for individuals around the world. Whereas it has become a more convenient method for people to order things. Apart from them, these types of established hypermarkets are delivering things directly at doorsteps. Consequently, these days the public encourage such kind of dispatching methods. This way of upgrading sales are reaching higher heights and people moving towards local grocery shops are being declined. Companies like Amazon and Flip-kart are now delivering supplies directly to their location, regardless of remote areas.
To get things from the city shopping centers have recently become more advantageous due to its one place platform availability. Therefore, people prefer to shop at such areas because it’s easy to access to various items at one stretch. Hence, the small town grocery merchants are facing bigger challenges in running their shops due to the advancement in technology. Their fame is fading away to the extent where it has come to an end-point. Big-basket has taken over the fresh fruit and vegetable sector as well which has knocked off the sale for the local vendors.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the advancement of the door step delivery system has a lot of benefits as it safes time, fuel and money. The best products are delivered at home without stepping out. As the world is evolving one should accept the advancement and not get too emotional and hence opt for an easy and hassle free life-style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... because of the current world scenario. Currently, online shopping has become a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, therefore, well, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12416107383 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65936368621 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637583892617 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2867294271 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.8235294118 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.07152692835 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0203288978838 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269846934627 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377854199475 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282538652015 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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