You and a couple of your colleagues would like to participate in a work-related seminar.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for
--detailed information regarding the dates
--program schedule
--Enquire about cost and possible discounts for groups
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to the program coordinator regarding an enquiry about the upcoming conference. Whereas, myself and some of my friends are willing to attend it.
I would like to know the complete detail about symposium such as when it will be conducted and its process. Apart from that, it will be highly beneficial if you could inform about the first and last day of pre-registration.
Furthermore, give me a brief description on agenda such as commencing and finishing day of the program, the start and end time, the total hour of one presentation, the break time, details about the presenter and the open forum.
I would like to seek an information about the amount that has to be paid for this course as well as I was wondering if you could provide concession in payment as we are a big batch to participate.
I would be grateful to you, if you could respond at your earliest convenience, hence, I will be able to register for the program successfully on time.
Your’s Faithfully
Elizabeth Manickam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR_S[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Your' or 'Yours'?
Suggestion: Your; Yours
...r the program successfully on time. Your’s Faithfully Elizabeth Manickam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, apart from, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90502793296 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93465766296 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5169580122 44.8134815571 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 4.34317383033 285% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207673672217 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854914793271 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453050980646 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109895075438 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272487674166 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.