Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road.
Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.
According to a few individuals, the public roads should be unoccupied at least once in a month. The automobile transportation and the non-government transporters should not be permitted on the highways. To an extent, having no movement of four wheeler s for a day will have its own merits and demerits
Once in a while, controlling the road network will have some benefit on the environment by minimizing air pollution. As we know various mixtures of noxious gases are emitted by the vehicles such as carbon monoxide, which have affected the health of human beings distinctly by causing various respiratory disorders. Apart from this it has also had bad impacts on the surroundings as well. Hence restraining the transportation will help in reducing the pollution to some extent. For example, the toxic substances released by these vehicles have started to affect the ozone layer and worsened the greenhouse effect.
To restrict the vehicles for some time may cause conflicts among people to some extent. In an emergency situation, while transferring a bleeding patient to the hospital, a person will not prefer to use public transportation, rather, they would like to reach their destinations on time, in their own vehicle. For example, in developing countries like India, there are lots of remote villages which do not have frequent access to the government buses. Hence during a crisis, it is better to use a personal four-wheeler instead.
In conclusion, trying to control the traffic by limiting the usage of two-wheeler s and four-wheeler s will definitely contribute in reducing the ecological impact on global warming. But at the same time completely restricting the locals to opt for public services during the time of urgency may turn in to a fear. Hence the rules should be different for an emergency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
According to few individuals point of view, they sug...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erits which will be discussed below. Once in a while controlling road networks ha...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... the individuals will not prefer to get an access to public transportation rather than th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, may, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23569023569 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03524848975 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9986772348 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155971648441 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058068831466 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574581332771 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990843023449 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727970027869 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.