You are studying for an exam, and you would like some time off work to complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
-- Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
-- Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
-- State how this qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Thomas,
I am writing this letter to inform you that, I am preparing for a university examination, therefore, I need my accumulated casual leave to finish my degree.
I kindly request you to approve my study leave for two weeks, hence I will be able to clear my final semester papers, thereby, I will pursue my goal by achieving a master’s degree in business management.
If you agree with my short vacation, I promise you that I will be accomplishing all the pending works at days of my absence by coming early to office as well as, I will work on weekends to catch up on outstanding duties.
By obtaining this particular certification, it will be helpful for me to get a higher position in our organization. Since we are conducting management and quality assurance training sessions, I can share my knowledge due to my expertise in this field.
I would be grateful to you, if you could help me in my hour of need by, therefore, please help me out with accepting my request on a few days off.
Yours sincerely.
Elizabeth Manickam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73655913978 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95253329951 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1595454531 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.833333333 76.5299724578 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 16.8248392259 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211021984779 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890706408562 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523338081043 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119067928115 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358102997161 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 8.37731958763 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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