You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr. Barnes,
Hope you are doing great. As you know, I am pursuing the Master's course in the field of Data Science from Upgrad Institute. And, I have to give my exams to complete my postgraduate course. Therefore, I request you to please provide me two-weeks study leave for preparation to give my exams.
The date sheet of my final tests have been posted on our University Facebook page which will be held on next month. Therefore, please allow me to spare some time on my exams to complete my master's course.
I understand that there is ongoing project with IKEA which needs to be delivered in next three months. However, after coming from leave, I will doing the implementation of the ongoing project in over-time and will deliver to the client till the last week of this month. Implementation requires a case study which requires a detailed analysis of some machine learning areas which I have already prepared and the document has been sent to your email id. Please provide your approval, and I will do the work after my study leave.
After completion of this course, I will be suggesting different strategies to our Sales team for getting more clients from this course as this will bring our company to another level by breaking it limitation in finances. And, the company business will expand to other countries. Therefore, I would require your acceptance to approve my leaves for the next two-weeks.
I will be happy to hear a positive response soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 145, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...owever, after coming from leave, I will doing the implementation of the ongoing proje...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, Shwatank Bhasin
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89147286822 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61320807417 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573643410853 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5680348881 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217643421662 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072185701266 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406495796009 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105320313873 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500199942241 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.