For two decades many countries of the world have been experiencing problems caused by rapidly growing populations in urban areas. Even though, several problems have arisen as a result of this, they can be tackled by both governments and individuals.
On the one hand, one of the first causes of overpopulation in large cities is lack of educational and medical resources in poorer areas that pulls people towards developed cities. Rural communities often face higher teacher shortages, dangerous or long journeys to school and can receive an education that is lacking in comparison to their urban school peers. As a result of this, they are more likely to want to live in urban centers.
Another major cause which has a big contribution to the overpopulation is the industrial and agricultural revolution. Since production of food and other goods became better due to use of updated machines, people have been able to raise more children.
For example, Beijing is a political and educational center of China with its 19 million population. Thus, people want to live there.
On the other hand, governments should make better services by building more hospitals and schools provided with latest technologies and experts and companies should also create jobs for people who live in countryside. Therefore, people may stop moving to cities. Furthermore, family planning must be promoted by governments in big cities. Special organizations should help parents to understand the need to have one or two children at the most.
To conclude, it is clear that the problems caused by overpopulation in urban areas are very serious. However, with the right actions by individuals and governments, the balance between population of countryside and cities can be kept.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...ing more hospitals and schools provided with latest technologies and experts and companies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, may, so, therefore, thus, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24822695035 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94877719697 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595744680851 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3937553364 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235687165683 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714687098576 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753206726726 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113379991122 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889884774224 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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