Many people think that international travel will decrease in future. Do you think it is a positive development? Give examples from your experience.
No doubt, air travel prices and cost of the hotels in the tourist destination had increased compared to earlier in the recent years. Apparently, this can be one of the main reasons, which can lead to the decrease in the international travel. However, in terms of environmental care, this is beneficial and sometime treated as a positive development. While, to some extent I tend to agree with this viewpoint, on the contrary in my opinion, this fact has its own advantages and disadvantages, which I will try to enunciate below
To begin with, some people hold the opinion that travel to other countries would diminish in the coming days and this is beneficial to all the countries because of multifarious reasons. Firstly, due to the increase in competitions between airline companies, number of flights flying from one destination to another destination had increased a lot; undeniably, this leads to more noise pollution and air pollution. Moreover, this affects the overall environment. Secondly, they believe that increase in the international travel are the main causes of new maladies such as Ebola and Swine flu, so it is better that people of one country do not travel to another country. Finally, if there would be less international travel it would lead to less terrorist activities, because many people thought that due to ease in travel, it is convenient for terrorist to travel from one place to another.
On the other hand, no doubt in case if global travel diminish, there would be negative impacts as well. Conversely, all the travel companies and airline companies will have a great loss in the business. Moreover, this can lead to loss in the employment, as companies will not require office staffs. Furthermore, most of the countries are earning mainly because of tourism and decrease in travel means a decrease in tourist, which can lead to the loss to the economic growth.
To recapitulate, undoubtedly a reduction in international travel has its own pros and cons. Therefore, it would be difficult to say that it can lead to positive development.
- The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer's money. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 80
- Some people work only a few months a year and take the rest of the time off to do whatever they like To what extent the advantages of this arrangement overweigh the disadvantage 66
- In the past sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous What message does this send to young peopl 58
- All education primary secondary and further education should be free to all people and paid for by the government Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experi 100
- Some think that these environmental problems are too big for individuals to be solved while others think that individuals cannot solve these environmental problems unless governments make some action Discuss both views and give your opinion 70
Comments
Dear Sir, Many Thanks for
Dear Sir,
Many Thanks for your comment. i will take care of this and try to write introduction in better way
Regards
if global travel diminish
if global travels diminish
flaws:
the introduction is not developed well:
'However, in terms of environmental care, this is beneficial and sometime treated as a positive development. While, to some extent I tend to agree with this viewpoint, on the contrary in my opinion, this fact has its own advantages and disadvantages,'
you need to be more straight forward for your opinions logically and grammatically.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 344 350
No. of Characters: 1680 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.307 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.884 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.81 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.933 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.441 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.933 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.076 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5