Dear Sir,
My name is Paulo and I was bestowed with culinary skills taught by you. Albeit a crash course, the tips I learned from your classes were reasons for compliments I am receiving since. Therefore, I am glad you asked me to share my feedback about the course and your "Kitchen Hacks'' cookery school.
Honestly speaking my culinary knowledge , before attending your classes, was amateur. However, I can see drastic improvement in my confidence while I am working in kitchen. Especially, I enjoyed the module 'Wonder Baking' where I learned to make cakes without using oven or any sophisticated equipment. Previously, I had no idea how much fun we can have by dexterous vegetable cuttings. I must not forget friendly approach of your trainers who were not only professional but also determined in their teaching methods.
Earlier, for my family, I used to cook only on weekends. Thanks to you, after successfully completion of my lessons, I am able to cook variety of foods with great enthusiasm everyday. I can see clear difference in myself and infact now and then I invite my relatives to taste delicious food. As word spread about my new found ability among our neighbours everyone is eager to savour my sumptuous meals. As a result, I have youtube channel in name of 'cooking shooking' which has millions subscribers.
I request you, if you don't mind, please start a new course for those who are interested in making Desserts. I would be delighted to enroll in new session as it gives me pleasure by honing new expertise. Thus, I can keep on collecting awestruck experience from my family members. I really appreciate for your time and patience in teaching me. I look forward to join again in your new classes.
Yours sincerly,
Paulo.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93624161074 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82383991727 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674496644295 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8055176971 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4210526316 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6842105263 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20975780444 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598597027204 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082843957558 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129122675687 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871718135156 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.