In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Twenty first century is rapidly advancing both technologically and economically. However, a novel menace of lifestyle disorders are also increasingly prevalent. Studies indicate that the average human weight of both men and women globally have considerably risen, in comparison to our ancestors. This essay will elaborate on some of the reasons attributing to this weight gain and give few insights on the countermeasures needed to solve the crisis.
Evidently, Obesity is one of the top contributors amongst non-communicable disease-based morbidity. Innovations in food sciences, and their rampantly unscrutinised execution at an industry level is the root basis of many diversely attractive unhealthy edible options One of the core culprits include fast food chains, which have vastly pervaded many countries of our world. Mixed with intelligent advertising and social media trends, youth have inexcusably favoured these quick bites offering rich flavours, while taking an ill-note of artificial preservatives and abnormally high calorie count these dishes offer. To quote a shining example, Kentucky fried chicken offers deep fried chicken wings and tasty burgers, loaded with salts and oil at an arguably reasonable price. No wonder, college students flock around their outlets, especially on those sale days, where two buckets of chicken can be purchased at the price of one tub.
On a further note, there is a considerable fall in people’s determination to commit themselves to the discipline of regular exercise. This may be a personal preference but, it is unfortunately obvious that this not being balanced with their diet. Gym might not be everyone’s cup of tea, however there are better options, one can choose to do at home. For instance, yoga has become significantly popular in several foreign countries including united states as an easy practice of expending energy, while improving one’s physical flexibility and mental stability. Many start-ups have taken an active role in manufacturing all natural, nutrient rich healthy diets like salads, tackling one’s satiety while curbing unwanted additives effectively. Participating in marathons and community walks regularly, can efficiently alter your body shape and fitness
To summarise, it is pertinent to have a stringent check on food manufacturers about their transparency with their ingredient list, meanwhile educating the public about the side effects of unhealthy feeding practices and the role of balancing their weight with reasonable activities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69920844327 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08745459136 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686015831135 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3017424988 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131141856211 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037302242509 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251181347888 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743407472142 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132318529188 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 150.0 78.4519038076 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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