Finance knowledge is no doubt a life nessessty. in today's modern world, it is a must to gain an experiance of managing money for adults. let alone young ones!. in many first-world countries, life skills has been evolved in education plans one of those life skills is expense management. I think it is an answer for a natural call of neccessty. It is a life saver for finance disturbutions, an athuorized way to be educated about such an important matter.
Expense management for secondary students protect them from money problems when they eventionlly join the working enviroment. many adults have not have that opportunity. thus they fell hard to life- thritning issuses. for example: being broke or had to work in dirty money to cover their needs. thats way early edcation can prevent that.
While other sourses than school is availabe mostly anywhere, counting on school-based material is needed. athuorized subjects is more safe and sufficient. They can look up esle where like books or the internent.but, some might be misguding .
To sum up, money management education should be a schools responsibility. it save lives so one can struggle less financially. Plus it is more efficentiont.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Finance knowledge is no doubt a life nes...
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...rk in dirty money to cover their needs. thats way early edcation can prevent that. ...
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...rk in dirty money to cover their needs. thats way early edcation can prevent that. ...
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...e internent.but, some might be misguding . To sum up, money management educatio...
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... should be a schools responsibility. it save lives so one can struggle less financia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, thus, while, for example, i think, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13265306122 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97927599327 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.709183673469 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8017213523 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1764705882 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5294117647 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221561554805 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556468399938 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570303893282 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116237580697 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031928998786 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.29 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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