You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Kyna,
It's been a long since we wrote to each other, I hope you are in the pink of your health; I am also doing well. I am writing to express my excitement to move into a new house, as you know I and my family always wanted to leave that crowded city and finally the moment is here. Also, I would like to invite you to my new home.
Toronto Downtown, Canada, the place where we used to live, was over congested, full of skyscrapers; therefore, we used to feel suffocated, which made us look for another place. Now that I got a job in Calgary, Alberta, so we all moved here.
Calgary is not only airy and spacious but also more secure than Toronto. Also, the house is big with a backyard which makes it all the more beautiful. The infrastructure of the house is magnificent and I would recommend you to visit here for your holidays, we will have great fun together.
Let me know about your plans when should I expect you, Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Warm regards,
Yachika Sharma
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- You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit 73
- Education is not a luxury but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth Do you agree or disagree 87
- Government investment in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money Governments must invest this money in public services instead Do you agree or disagree 84
- You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46606334842 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45518377237 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638009049774 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8865064416 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487345388999 0.216113520407 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163429104384 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165957341943 0.0603063233224 275% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26573530816 0.12726935374 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145731753552 0.0580467560999 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.