You have recently moved to a different location Write a letter to an english speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Maria
I am writing this letter to tell you that I recently have moved to a new house by the beach. You know my long desire to live near the ocean. Well, I thought it was the perfect time to make it true. However, selling my old house wasn't easy and for the children leaving their long life friends was an issue but, I think they are just as happy as I am with the new home. I am sorry I haven't told you before but, everything has happened so fast moreover, I have been very busy with the move.
The house is huge, it has 5 bedrooms, three living rooms, a big pool, and the basement is perfect for my small brewery equipment. I am very excited about this new chapter because with all the space I have I might buy a pool table to play with my friends.
I will be throwing a party for Charles's birthday, so, I hope you can come and spend a couple of days with us and share a couple of beers.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
your Carlos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... it true. However, selling my old house wasnt easy and for the children leaving their...
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Line 2, column 382, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...as I am with the new home. I am sorry I havent told you before but, everything has hap...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...eers. Hoping to hear from you soon. your Carlos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07978723404 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04323874798 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.906312226 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2222222222 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252202184554 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977401206716 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946699322906 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112726694023 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087919749046 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.38 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.31 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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