Every individual has the capability to change the world, our ingenuity in relaying, and portraying ideas that can catapult the advancement of technology, ideas or theorems in any field resides deep within us. We only need to find out how we can birth this idea in an ever changing world of technical prowess, knowledge escalation, and idea creation, this in turn would make us relevant.
One of the foremost influencer of the world in the 21st century named Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft, never had any influence from past achievers. His cognitive idea to have every home own a personal computer (pc) drove him to create the world's largest corporation dealing with Operating System. This passion has seen a lot of start-ups in terms of technology (highly not linked to past achievements) as they begin from scratch to create an ecosystem of influence, thereby driving the world towards a data-centric-technology mindset. The revolution of the internet, big data, and cloud computing has no significant trace to any historian. Bill gates as a foremost stalwart and driver of some of these great innovations never relied on past achievements. His continuous drive for services to human in form of smart technology, has birthed ideas that are now shaping the world, hence bringing us to accept reality that we can survive without influence.
Furthermore, the initial invention of the airplane by the Wright brothers, who believed that "one day man would fly on a bird-like metal" was never hinged on past achievement in that field. Never had anyone taken time to analyze, and ascertain the success of making an airplane. Their first successful trial saw the plane flew to an altitude of 30000ft above sea level, and crash landing some few minutes after that. Several iterations, and improvements were carried out to ensure that the airplane stayed afloat on the air for a short period of time. This initial innovation gave birth to the modern aero plane, as other airspace industry giants capitalized on it to build theirs. It is noteworthy to ascribe adulation to the wright brothers for trying something new without a pre-historical evidence of any achievement in that line.
Moreover, the creation of Montessori school system by Miss Montessori - an idea that little kids can learn but with physical drawings, shapes, arts, and contextual images and educative music that show representation of what they are being taught by their teachers in order for them to properly assimilate, comprehend, and flow along their learning prowess at that tender age was never done by anyone. Montessori crafted the idea after struggling with teaching her own kids simple things such as reading alphabets, numerical numbers, and simple words. The proposed Montessori style of teaching has been used mostly by Europeans, and Africans as an infant method of education for kids under the age of 1-4 years. This has had a great influence in performance in terms of social behavior, moral languages, and ethical conduct. The Montessori style of education never existed, and was not hinged on any pre-historical achievements.
However, it is very import to lay the foundation of successes that are also hinged by past achievements within the field - aside technology, the building of the Seven star hotel in Dubai was based on the success of building a mega city on Dubai, a successful achievement that has seen Dubai transformed into a world class hospitable environment for leisure and tourism. This El-Bujarab is one of the seven wonders of the world as its beauty, elegance, and artistic master piece state-of-the-art structures are a wonder to behold. But, the success of the building is tied to numerous achievements within Dubai, which include the palm island (Artificial island built in Dubai), and the Dubai Airport - another beautiful city of quintessence architecture. These duo inspired the Leader of Dubai to recreate, and create the world's best hotel - El Bujarab.
Inspirations, ideas, and actions are cognitive decisions that could bring about changes in the society. From the creation of Electric Vehicle by Elyon Musk to the premiering of Amazon - a hub for digital market - buy and sell. Certain achievements are not hinged on past success stories in that same field of endeavor. With the advent of technology, it is easier to scale off, and recreate your own world - your ideas, and products that could serve humanity without credit to an existing achievements. Nonetheless, great ideas can still be inspired or spurn off from existing success story or concepts this could lead to a larger influence for goal getters, and ideates, and also help to achieve generational sustainability in terms of product or services created.
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 83
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 79
- Two years ago the town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel During the past two years tourism in Ocean View has increased new businesses have opened there and Ocean View s tax revenues have risen by 30 percent The best w 68
- The following is an excerpt from a speech given to the School Board about a change to the curriculum Because the future will be dominated by technology we must make four years of computer programming mandatory for all high school students If our students 68
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that arts can flourish and be available to all people Others believe that government funding of the arts threaten the integrity of the arts 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...nal computer pc drove him to create the worlds largest corporation dealing with Operating Syst...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ne stayed afloat on the air for a short period of time. This initial innovation gave birth to ...
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Line 9, column 752, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this duo' or 'These duos'?
Suggestion: This duo; These duos
...iful city of quintessence architecture. These duo inspired the Leader of Dubai to recreat...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
...er of Dubai to recreate, and create the worlds best hotel - El Bujarab. Inspirations, id...
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Line 11, column 489, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'achievement'?
Suggestion: achievement
... humanity without credit to an existing achievements. Nonetheless, great ideas can still be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 130.0 58.6224719101 222% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3969.0 2235.4752809 178% => OK
No of words: 768.0 442.535393258 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16796875 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.26429605181 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92065706119 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 409.0 215.323595506 190% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532552083333 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 1232.1 704.065955056 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 20.0 1.77640449438 1126% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9089242933 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.75 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186804427392 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461211974743 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552692510564 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888844753491 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312259999969 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 212.0 100.480337079 211% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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