Some people think government should spend money on measures to save language with few speakers from dying out completely. Other think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Language plays a key role not only in communication but also for our culture. Few people believe that politicians should allocate money on endangered languages, Some think that it is not necessary to waste money on dying languages. In my view, I think government should protect the language from extinction. This essay will discuss the reasons before reaching to a feasible conclusion.
To embark, I believe government should prevent old languages from extinction as these languages present culture od the nation. People can easily loss their culture like, history and literature if their languages die out. Thus, there might be no identity of the country left behind. Moreover, these languages are also used for academic study. Students learn many things about their culture and history throughout these languages. For instance, It is reported by the tribune newspaper that researches found the mechanism of construction of pyramid through the old Egyptian language.
On the other hand, there are two reasons that why these languages do not need to be protected. Firstly, moat of the entinct languages are very difficult for communication. Compared with this endangered languages, the languages which are used in the modern society are much easier and sufficient for people to speak. The old languages are complicated to speak and there is no need to conserve them. Secondly, international languages are become the main trend because of globalisation. It is easy for public to make use of english at their home as well as workplace.
To sum up, I firmly reiterate that although extinct languages are not useful for modern life, but these are helpful to study the knowledge about the history and culture.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21090909091 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79490918553 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.32049233 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2941176471 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222182435889 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696171222222 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824144340079 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137199274379 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116584734886 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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