The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare different methods of generating electricity and 4 types of renewable energy sources in 2 countries in 2009. It can be clearly seen that the amount of electricity generated in Germany was higher than that of France.
To begin with, conventional thermal contributed to 59,6 % of the electricity produced in Germany, which was roughly 2,5 times as high as nuclear figure. Renewables contributed the least to electric power, standing at only 17,4%. In contrast, nuclear power was the main source of electricity in France (76%), while conventional thermal was the least used to pr...
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